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Something different in B&W – I put this up as a photo critique – so please feel free to let me have it based on your views of the shot….I am also happy to critique back… just post links to your work…
I will see what people think before I say anything good or bad about it…. I sure have my opinions..
I find the light little on the harsh side. other then that lovely capture
I really like the pose, lighting and camera angle on the model. But the pole on the left is very distracting as is the shadow bottom right.
Wait… the picture has a pole?
A bit washed out and the mirror brace (?) in the back is way too distracting.. But still, it's a nice capture of emotion and a good mix in the message, so that should keep 'em comin' back.
Sillycones ? but nice abs…
Your lighting is harsh, but that is your style and is what I like about it. If you could soften the shadows from camera right that would help, or moving the main light more towards camera left and raising it a bit.
From a compositional view, she should have moved about a step and a half towards camera right. This would help to balance the image, and block the chair that is behind her.
Hope this helps.
The side boob works, but I would have pulled those puppies together and used shadow to give them depth. Also, I find the background composition a bit messy, it attaches to the model too much (behind hair, and some pole from the side boob).
Looks good small, when looking at the 500px size, I notice that her facial expression is not attractive (the expression not the face) and there seems to be mottling on the thigh that hints at cellulite (but isn't)
I like it the way it is 🙂 It's not conforming to any cliche'd idea. Well done.I find myself looking at the image and enjoying it, which , to me, is the mark of a good photo.